I personally don't think the skin is too white at all. High elves are supposed to have pale skin after all.
Really like the detail on the shield 9/10 :)
Like most of it, though it'snot very dramatic and doesn't pop, despite all the detail. I suspect I will say this a million times on this site, your flesh is no good, too white, too opaque, the cheeks are blocky and clunky.