this is a prettty good first mini and for that I give you a seven but here are some points of (i hope ) constructive critisim
#1 A veryslightly thinned out wash of flesh wash ink or Chestnut ink would bring out the color and hilights in the hair much better.
#2 the bra thingie looks fine but the higlight are a bit trong and thik I suggest you thin your paints more and have less on your brush and cover with two ar even thre coates to get a good even coverage. Also it would look better if the higlinghts were consentrated around the areas the light would realishtically catch such as the uprrer portion of the tits.
anywat the gems are very good so is the helmet and the base good luck painting
Greets Squig
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