Pretty good for a first attempt @ NMM. Mine looked way worse. ; )
Clothing, Face Helmet and Gauntlets look really good. But I dont like the front of the shield and the spearblade that much. they look somewhat drybrushed pretty raw. the armor is alright, but for the shield and spear, I recommend thinning the paint further, mixing a bit and some more subtle shading. the spear's shaft (?) looks too simple, too.
But all in all a good mini! ; )