Give me Comments For I am Hungry!

Unc

New member
Heh. Anyway, I would really love some feedback for my latest mini. There\'s not much I can put in here that isn\'t already in the description with the pic.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/?id=47368

Thanks!

-Unc
 

MClimbin

New member
I originally left a message asking for a link, then I found it, so I thought I would post it:

http://www.coolminiornot.com/?id=45317

I\'ll leave a message there.

MC
 

Unc

New member
Oops!

Sorry, I can\'t believe I forgot to post the link. I feel so stupid :p. Anyway, the correct link is here.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/?id=47368

Thanks

-Unc
 

tabithatan

New member
here\'s me two cents of critique.

For ur 6th mini its a good effort. I like the way you tried to blend the white/grey on her skirt.. but it needs some work.... it incidently is one of the more outstanding features of this mini.....

the major thing to look out for is neatness.... its a common weakness for most new painters anyways... I struggled with neatness for like 2 years before I got it somewat okay... its still a problem today as I try to juggle neatness with realism.

Its an interesting idea to paint the fault like scar tissue....and I think your ivory-white skin is kinda nice... esp the cheekbones and forehead... very very nicely done.....

just one important detail.... The hair colour and lipstick colour dont match the skin tone. The blue you have chosen is nice but it is considered a \"cool\" colour and would better suit a lady with a pinkish skintone.... ie, your skintone paints have to have more red or beige or pink in it so that the mini wearing the lipstick/haircolour combo wont look odd. Right now she looks real stark and unnatural wearing the colours.

Its okay if you are going for the stark look, but try this same blue with a beige or pinkish skintone for your next mini and you will notice the difference.

If you want a blue shade that complements an ivory-white/yellow-white skintone, try a blue with a little green in it like turquoise.... or a \"warmer\" blue .... ie a blue that seems less \"icy\" and has more orange or yellow pigmentation in it.
 
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