Maybe the flesh is a little thick but there isn't much of it 'cause of the mask. The model is sufficiently highlighted but the yellows and dark surfaces are very hard to photograph.
Overall a pretty nice piece. The sword is pretty cool, though the highlights are a little wide. The gold looks nice though maybe one final highlite of white along the edges would bring it out even more. Your flesh however is very, very thick. and the highlights seem abscent. Still, good job.