Not bad at all for a first attempt, mine were a lot worse lol. Some tips could maybe be thin your paints down a little bit and remember the highlights and shadows, especially on the front wings where the colour looks quite flat. But yeah, that's actually really good for a first attempt. Keep painting man!
thanks for voting! any tips are welcome. this is my first ever attempt so if you could give me a score as normal and then leave a comment about how i did for a first go. feedback wanted!