o.k...since no one else has i'll try. first, something funky is going on with the pic. need a better pic. the green goo needs more defanitions, shading, mixing in some other greens wouldn't hurt either. the brass/white combo is working i think, but you might want to durty up the silver metal (being nurgle some rustyness wouldn't hurt) otherwise keep at it. we aren't all picaso.