hummmm let's see.... I think the first thing you should care about is painting the whole miniature, I mean painting all the zones without leaving any undercoating place visible. The legs for example seem to have been painted only until it's half. The hoofs are also totally black. As for what I can see painted, EVERYTHING has been drybrushed or apllied only one layer of paint (like the brown, it's always better to paint 2 or 3 or as many as necessary layer of thin paint than 1 thick one, especially if these are light colours on black undercoat-maybe you should try thw white one?) It also lacks of highlighting and the blood on the mouth should shine. Finally, the base is not finished, it would give you an extra point. ANd also try to put a background so we can appreciate better the details and everything in general. I didn't pretend to be mean at all, just help you to improve ;)Keep it up! Albert
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