My first go at painting minitures. I think it's not bad, but the camera flash seems to really show up all the flaws. I would say it looks a lot neater in the flesh (so to speak).
I don't know why your score is so low you can panit very neatly and although the picture is not as good as it could be it is obvious you have the basics right. The thing you lack most is shades and highlights as the colours look flat. You have picked a complex mini for your first attempt and you have made a decent job of it. I give you a 7 as I can see the potential in your painting ability but I will vote you a 10 to try and put your score to a more realistic level. Keep it up and don't be discouraged.