Black Templar second in squad

[AndyG]

Heres the finished version of the second in the Black Templars squad im getting done for GD

Heres the link

http://www.coolminiornot.com/338183

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[Dragonsreach]

Since its for a competition I'm gonna nit pick like mad for you Andy:
Tactical marking shoulder pad, you need to pick up the broken/slight over paint of the blacklining.
There are several spots on the picture Bolter, backpack chest eagle which are showing up as white. If its the picture Fine, if not you need to sort them out.
Mouthpiece shouldn't that have grill work?


Only being an absolute "twonker" like this in order that you have a good chance at GD.
:brushwave:

 

[AndyG]

Good man grill shadow will highlite a tad more to emphasise; yep tacx shoulder pad needs sorting well spotted. I saw the spots and looked again at the fig and for the life ofe I can't see them irl so I've got to assume that it's the lighting or something they just ain't there.

This is what I'm talking about mike useful nit picking

 

[freakinacage]

Yeah the white looks like reflections picked up by the camera to me. Can't pick up on anything that Mike missed

 

[Dragonsreach]

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Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrm Kinda sorry to mention this............ but just looking at the NMM of the backpack's skull emblem, not too sure if the Highlights are on the wrong side for the light?
Compare the bottom picture left hand leg highlights against the skulls highlight position.


Ohhoh Andy's gonna hit me!

 

[AndyG]

Ah yes there is an obvious reason for this mike I'm surprised at you it because er yes erm well er ...........oh f*ck!