i believe, for a relatively large freehand like this more details needs to be added - to me this is a not very bad
start of the freehand. for sure some iconography would help but also more cracks, color variations, interesting details, weathering... you name it. a banner like this isnt painted in two hours you know, i think i worked the one to my horrors in more than two weeks- worth it in the end!
patience young padwan

and be
sure to figure out the battleplan before you continue, otherwise you might end up just killing time banging your head against the wall (ive been there too!)
hmm...also not sure about the banner position on the shoulder. well... he doesnt look too comfortable with it

ill stop harass you now :soldier: