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1st place at Crusade 2005 ( Belgium ) I\'m very proud of him, if you spot a mistake please tell me !
1st place at Crusade 2005 ( Belgium ) I\'m very proud of him, if you spot a mistake please tell me !
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Shawn R. L.
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You should be proud. That\'s a nice piece. Nice subtle freehand.
My one critique would be the stalks of grass. They look like giant celery. If it were mine I would have it about 1/4 the height and much finer.
My one critique would be the stalks of grass. They look like giant celery. If it were mine I would have it about 1/4 the height and much finer.
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MalleusMiniArt
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I love to see how you improve Mordred! And this piece really shows this trend 
! But as Ilike to see you getting better I`ll be merciless .
The part that IMHO doesn`t match is the freehand - the pattern is too chaotic, doesn`t push my imagination. You should also work on your reds (ehhhh, difficult colour, I know ....) - it`s not rich enough, even when taking in consideration that you wished to get a dark red. Overall good cloak , with a slightly worse hood. My favourite part is this enormous mace (but why you opted for a crystal like skulls - if they would be made indeed of crystal the reflections would be different, making it alomost impossible to paint in this scale). Good execution of nmm.
Hope I haven`t pushed things too far - honestly, I really like this model. Keep up good work!
! But as Ilike to see you getting better I`ll be merciless .The part that IMHO doesn`t match is the freehand - the pattern is too chaotic, doesn`t push my imagination. You should also work on your reds (ehhhh, difficult colour, I know ....) - it`s not rich enough, even when taking in consideration that you wished to get a dark red. Overall good cloak , with a slightly worse hood. My favourite part is this enormous mace (but why you opted for a crystal like skulls - if they would be made indeed of crystal the reflections would be different, making it alomost impossible to paint in this scale). Good execution of nmm.
Hope I haven`t pushed things too far
- honestly, I really like this model. Keep up good work!Brokenblade
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Reeeaallly nice, i\'ve seen a great improvement in your work here and this goes to show it, i think the red if fine as it goes with the overal feel (i mean you can still tell its red), however i have to agree about the grass, in such a dark scene the grass stands right out, other than that it\'s fine, i voted 9
Joe.
Edit : Just took another look and i forgot to mention the amazing Nmm, especially on the mace, congrats again.
Joe.
Edit : Just took another look and i forgot to mention the amazing Nmm, especially on the mace, congrats again.
thanks for the comments ! Przemas, please don\'t stop giving comment and criticism like that, because I really like it when people give me their honest opinion ... it\'s the best way to improve and that is still my goal. so really, you didn\'t push anything too far
I have to agree about the grass, I\'ll give it a slight brushing with muted colours and cut it down a little to match the overall feel of the miniature abit more. I\'m also going to add a couple of little freehands on the red parts to make them less boring.
I have to agree about the grass, I\'ll give it a slight brushing with muted colours and cut it down a little to match the overall feel of the miniature abit more. I\'m also going to add a couple of little freehands on the red parts to make them less boring.
