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[Savagemind666]

hi... what you think is wrong or weak with that guy?

 

[Thecadian]

For:

Blending on the red (very nice)

Base

Purity seal

Against:

The way his face is connected to the shoulder. (however this is the sculpt so isnt really your problem)

Blood (it needs to be a darker red, nearly black in places)

Chainsword (this is only minor, maybe try for a differant colour for the chainsword casing instead of it all being metal.

Overal i very nice piece id give it a 7


(i hope i haven\'t come across as being to critical )

 

[Brother Tom]

I like the red also but the thing i\'m not so keen on is the flesh tone, it looksa bit similar to the cream cloth areas.

 

[usurpator]

couldn\'t the skin be a little more greenish to make it more different from the cloth part?

 

[vincegamer]

The metallic gold bits seem a bit dingy to me. Not smoothly polished but not looking corroded either.

 

[freakinacage]

i think he\'s well done. the metallics look flat, is all

 

[Savagemind666]

thank´s for helping me!!!

 

[usurpator]

ACH!
once more CMON talks to me in German:
\"Savagemind666 hat eine neue Antwort in einem Beitrag geschrieben, den du abonniert hast im CoolMiniOrNot Forums.
Du kannst ihn unter folgender Adresse anschauen:\"
As DragonReach said: it knows Im mul:tilingual.... but how does it do that?
:cussing:
I think your painting is going in the right direction, perhaps concentrate on the face and its rare expression? It should/could be the focal point

 

[Ogrebane]

Theres really not much wrong with this mini and by that I mean its very well painted. The white could use some more blending and the blood needs some work otherwise well done.

 

[Manus]

the white trim on the rope needs some more work, not as smooth as the rest.
The rest looks well painted - like the skin color btw.