Nice work on the nmm, and the red tunic is looking very good. A bit pale for a dark elf, maybe a matter of taste. Dark skin would have stood out well surrounded by all these light parts imo. The back of the armor looks a bit odd, I think there is one light stroke too many or the top one goes a bit too much to the right. I bit rougher on this side too.
A word on the bicarbonate snow, it can be good to add a hint of light blue paint in the mix, it compensates for the bi-carb tendency to yellow over time
