Originally posted by Ogrebane
I gave this a 7. I like the concept and some parts of this are very well done. The blood and lava or heated metal (whatever) are very good. The base is a bit confusing. Are they crystals of metal I wasnt sure. Also the whaite hair looks unfinished. Perhaps a flame color would have looked better.
Also the blood on his legs (Or molten metal) is going in random directions. Is this the effect you where after? Its confusing to me but then again I dont know the fluff for this dood. (except that he sleeps till called upon to kick some a$$)
Overall a good job and I think at leat a 7 maybe 7.5.
The magma is spouting out in random directions from within his legs cavaties
The crystals are... well... crystal
Their craftworld crashlanded on a planet after their wraithbone stopped responding to their songs. After a while, and when they were trying desperatly to repair the ship, a bonesinger accidently stumpled upon the crystals that reacted to their songs, just like wraithbone, just slower.
So now they use the crystals for most of their armour and the little wraithbone they got left for communications and weapons as it conducts better and is easier to make sharp (for weapons).
The white hair does look unfinished on the picture, but that is mostly due to the light from the lamps. White is very hard to photograph properly
Thank you for all your comments, means more to me than the crummy score of 6 he is at right now
Rather disapointing... but ooh well...
