Black Templar Chaplain

Talonicus

Talonicus

New member
Hi all.
I have just posted up my newest paintjob.
If you follow the wip thread you will have seen this little fellow before, I have decided now that he is finished.
I am pleased with the effect of gleam on the armour and the freehand along the crozius shaft.
Hope you all like him.
Please vote and comment, good or bad.

Chaplain


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funnymouth

Active member
its a great mini talon, and though i dont post much in the wip thread, i have been following this guy. perfect mini for this sort of thing, a great idea. the freehands on the crozius are neat, and add a lot to the figure.
now for some constructive crit:
1) nmm gold on the inside of the left arm sholder pad is a bit yellow.
2) the bone looks flat in comparison to the reflective armor (esp. face, skull on crozius). i suggest either a little more shading ( perhaps with a touch of snakebite or giving it some sharp hilights. either way i think those parts need a bit of definition and more contrast. id like to see the terminator honors on the p - fist to be in bone too.
3) the script on the tabbard looks almost too washed out, a little more black in the more recessed script would help.
4) the feathers of the crozius - missing somthing....i cant put my finger on it....the blending doesnt look very smooth....perhaps more of a gem/nmm effect would work well on each of the feathers individually.
5) the holster, dont quite know whas going on there, but it doesnt look as good as the rest.
still better than i could muster. nice job.
 
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