Candy&Cola SDE LE

[Entiago]

So I posted up Candy&Cola, the Limited Edition model for Super Dungeon Explore.
I would like some insight if anyone can help me on any tips or anything else that needs to be done.
She is a WIP, I need to do the base and clean up some parts. The armor and sword is NMM.

Currently she sits at a 5.5 rating, and I would like to get a higher rating on something without having to do a GW model.
Any and all comments, critiques, criticisms would be welcome.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/292091?browseid=3274519

 

[Wicksy]

The scoring wont we as high as it could because it isnt finished. I'd suggest completing the model before posting for scoring. That being said, its looking good so far.

The highlights look well placed, they just need blending. The hair looks good, the eyes look pretty nice. The skin needs some shading to bring it out. The NMM on the sword needs more work. There isnt enough contrast to make it pop and look like metal.

 

[Entiago]

thanks for the reply.yeah I did take into account shes not finished yet. How would one make the NMM "pop" with contrast? rather what colors or...nvm, I coul dlook up articles, silly me Im still sleepy.

thanks again for the critique

 

[SkelettetS]

probably the most cartoony style ive seen nmm dont work at all though, muuuuuuuch more contrast is needed. personally i prefer going the whole way from almost white to almost black. also, dark blue (like midnight blue) or browns are cool to have littlebit in the mix.

 

[supervike]

It's very cute and I like the style, but it is a bit rough.