this may seems a little harsh but things to work on:
the photos aint; up to much. they are small and the top one is very blurry
the base looks unfinished as the grey of the stone seems to have spilled onto the black base. also there doesn\'t appear to be much hu=highlighting /shading (also, add a small amount of brown as it makes it look more natural)
the cloak appears to be block painted with just three shades of grey and white
and the freehand, although fairly neat(ish) for a first try, isn\'t in keeping with an elf tbh
sorry if this all seems harsh but it something to work on eh? i reckon your warrior priest was better tbh