comments on my senmm!

[Olov]

i want some comments on my senmm.
its the first time im trying painting nmm.
well i want your comments.maybe i will enter gd\'s young bloods someday with this mini.
well..the pic(i know its blurry but..)

 

[KatieG]

I think it needs some more white, it doesn\'t look much like chrome... I\'d tone down the blue and the brown a bit for more white. If you look at soe really good examples of SENMM, like Arjay\'s, you\'ll notice a large part of the SENMM is either really light blue/white for the upper part, and really light brown/white for the lower part. Also, your horizon line is barely noticeable, I think you need to make it more obvious. Hope this helps.
--Katie G.

 

[mouse]

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Originally posted by KatieG
I think it needs some more white, it doesn\'t look much like chrome... I\'d tone down the blue and the brown a bit for more white. If you look at soe really good examples of SENMM, like Arjay\'s, you\'ll notice a large part of the SENMM is either really light blue/white for the upper part, and really light brown/white for the lower part. Also, your horizon line is barely noticeable, I think you need to make it more obvious. Hope this helps.
--Katie G.

She said it all.

 

[Chrispy]

Yes, the problem with the blue sky is it\'s too Cerulan, which is the color of the ocean. What you want is Azure, which looks purple in comparison, but actualy the amount of red put into the blue is very small. With all of these questions about SENMM, I REALLY need to update my NMM article, or even make an entirely new one. Well, I\'ll be looking for things to pauint for examples, then..