Dark Angel renegate SM

[RussianDragon]

there he is!!!
so what do u think?
it is a link on CMON:
http://www.coolminiornot.com/126956


and better pics here:
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/7193/end17lv.jpg

 

[penguin]

Hey! Nice stuff Fantastic OSL, lovely dark scheme. Glad you didn\'t go for the metallics I gave him a 9. The base could do with a bit more, the chainsword is a weak area and there is no script on the parchment tabard. Overall, howvere, the atmosphere you have created and the great painting makes this an awesome model!

 

[RussianDragon]

thank you, Penguin
1. what should i do wit the base? there are just rocks and rocks...
2. and i dont like writing scripts on the tabard...
3. chainsword- i tried to make it old and rusty, as a shield..

 

[penguin]

Well, the base is good but the drybrushing is a bit rough. You could add a skull, a bit of industrial ruin or whatever takes your fancy, just to liven it up. That said, this base brings out the mini quite nicely

I forgive you for not writing on the tabard

As for the chainsword, the handle is especially cool but the main part is a bit flat. It looks as if you started a camo pattern on it, or maybe that\'s just weathering? Either way, it needs tidying up to make it clear whether it\'s weathering or camo. One more highlight along the edge would stop it from being so flat.

Hope that helps, remember these are just tiny criticisms on a very good model ^ ^

~Bill

 

[supervike]

I like the understated base just fine....

I also really like the shade of green and the OSL eyes.

Really solid stuff...I\'ll go vote now.

 

[demonherald]

Agreed nice work..Maybe a little OTT on some of the weathering for my own taste....(that s just my own taste) but it is a renegade.. Technically very nice work..
9 from me

 

[Thecadian]

i really like it

however on the chainsword it looks like theres a blob of paint i dont know if this is there for a reason but hey....


james

 

[Kraan]

OSL OSL OSL

Great eyes, they really catch the attention!
I\'ll try something similar for myself???

 

[RussianDragon]

2 Thecadian
blob of paint dirt on chainsword..

thanks for commets..
soon you\'ll see blood angels terminators-also renegates..

i know my mistakes with that mini- i had to remove putity seals and insignia from the shield, and all other symbols of imperium in case he is a renegate.. so i will do it next time..

and my advice for everybody- go buy Urban basing kit and new chaplain- it is amazing model

 

[Thecadian]

thanks it looks really good i didnt like the mini origionally but youve opened my eyes

james