Demon Queen

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joshomatic

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Doing the finishing touches and corrections on this thing, and I thought I would get some helpful criticism or ideas. It's epoxy putty over a wire armature, 8 1/4" tall. Thanks for looking!

Bigger pics at:
http://joshvenis.deviantart.com/art/Demon-Queen-147019598

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Chrome

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She's cute! lol

But, looking at the detail on the model I think you could do a better job with the lips, they don't really fit in my opinion, might be a bit too large.

The hands looks a bit off I think but hands are extremely difficult to get right.
I'd give her a bit thicker thighs and less wide crotch but I believe that's just a matter of taste.

All in all this is definitely beautiful and it looks like it has great potential!
 
ukJames

ukJames

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Very nice sculpt. The figure is very well proportioned. *ahem*. ..kinda looks like a character from that movie Avatar. ...i really like the horns, and the elf-like ears. But i agree with the above post with regards to the width of the crotch. But i guess that's down to personal taste. Wish i had your skill for sculpting. Kudos +1.
 
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Prophecy07

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I like it. It doesn't exactly scream "terrible creature from another plane of existence" but the sculping is spot on. You may also want to look at where her sword meets the hilt, there's a bit of a gap there.

After a second look, with those lips she kind of reminds me of a muppet...


Ah hah!

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Chrome

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You are definitely getting better! They look good both of them but this one definitely has more 'accurate' shapes and detail. Good job!
 
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Prophecy07

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I think her left forearm (sword holding arm) is a touch too long. I like the paintjob on the finished one. But this one is defintely an improvement in the sculpt. It's neat to see how it progressed from the last one to here.
 
Tercha

Tercha

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Nice! and a lot better than anything I can do, but the sword blade at the hilt end just looks wrong to me..
 
Rugne

Rugne

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Aha! I see you'vee upped the bra count! I guess even Demon Queens feel the need for a little extra support :D

I like it man, keep going!

Marc
 
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Prophecy07

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The unfortunate thing about true slaneeshi armies/demons is that you're going to be playing them at places that are often filled with kids, so you really have to be careful with what you show.
 
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Chrome

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Prophecy07 said:
The unfortunate thing about true slaneeshi armies/demons is that you're going to be playing them at places that are often filled with kids, so you really have to be careful with what you show.
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Yep, so the more boobies you field the better!

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Have to follow the manufacturer's example! :rotfl:
 
mickc22

mickc22

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I agree with the crotch comment, it looks more correct in the first sculpt. I also think the "hair" is better in the first one as it looks more like part of the head rather than being stuck on
but the torso proportions are much better in the newer sculpt, as has been said already there is something about the sword arm that is a bit "off" IMO it's the hand that throws it off


@Rugne: Don't worry it's not a schlong, it's filled with teeth! lol
 
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Prophecy07

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It's worse though. Go read the fluff. Daemonettes have sexy female bodies, crab claws and both genitals. That means toothed labia and big hairy dick under the same loincloth.
 
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joshomatic

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I've cut the sword arm down for resculpting, it was definitely too long and the hand looked like a tiny package of hot dogs. I'm waiting on more brown stuff to show up, so I can start to blend the tentacles into the head and the lower arms into the torso, and all of the other things that are driving me crazy now that I notice them! I'm also redoing the sword for the third time, to possibly stab my eyes out.
The criticism is appreciated, thank you people.
 
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