Forge World Great Unclean One WIP need criticism!

[Mourner]

this might be a bad idea, but:

How\'s about pushing the contrast on the sword wrapping, highlighting to white. and adding some filthy stains, as if the bindings are dirty bandages (or at least have been).

although, the white might make the wrappings stand out too much,,,,

 

[freakinacage]

dont worry about the intestines that much! they still look good

 

[Cleezy]

My only thoughts dirty up the wrapping and add some pink around the pustules on his leg and bring the main parts of the pustule up a little more to make the look like spots/sores

Great work though

 

[Stiff Neck Studio]

Alright I have a ton of stuff to try to get to on this guy tonight now. Thanks guys. Hopefully i will e able to post another set of photos tonight with the reccomendations you all have made.