freebooter succubus (me luvs it)

[monkeyman7x]

hey guys,
ok this time i will try and keep to regular updates and actually finish it ;p

As the title suggests ive started a succubus. its my FIRST time doing nmm so any comments, advice and critiques are very welcome.

hope you like what little i have started

chris

p.s. its a bit smoother irl than shown in the pics

 

[Roger Bunting]

It\'s a good start. I do think you can probably take the highlights that bit further to pure white. It looks like there is a tiny bit there but maybe a little more would do it?

 

[TAB Studio]

I would suggest a file to her right arm
She is a pretty one I have her here in line.

 

[monkeyman7x]

lol yes, i only just realised the flash:redface:

also, i added more white to the blade, and shaded it more too,,looks much better, pics later today but for now,,sleep

 

[freakinacage]

oh dear, i hate missing flash like that! nmm is looking good though

 

[monkeyman7x]

ok, here is the sword touched up, the flash removed (not repainted though) and the sheild removed (i think the wings will go back on)

any better?

 

[gaspode]

I dont know anything about NMM but that certainally is an improvement on the original picture.

Its looking very good indeed.

 

[hubbabubba]

THe blade is looking good, I kinda liked the shield idea, but the strap needed to go on the inside of the shield, and be in tension across the body (i.e. pulled tight) to look like it\'s bearing the weight of the shield.