FW Big Trakk

[kulandini]

Hello,

It's been a pretty long time ago since I last posted here, but I recently completed a rather large project and I would like some comments and critcs.

It took me well over three months to put together and paint, but I had a lot of fun and it gave me the chance to try some painting techniques that were relatively new to me, like using weathering pigments.
The Supa-Kannon and the grotz are magnetized and the grot sponsons are also removable. This makes it easier to transport (if I ever get to gaming, that is)

I'm sorry for the massive amount of pictures, but there is a lot to show....

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[kulandini]

I hope you like it and please let me know what you think.
I know commenting on vehicles is different than single miniatures, but please fire all your crits at me, I'm trying to improve

Thanks for watching,
cheers!

-Tom

 

[freakinacage]

awesome! is it converted at all or straight from the box, as it were

looks great either way

 

[kulandini]

awesome! is it converted at all or straight from the box, as it were

looks great either way

Thanks!,
It's just straight from the box I'm afraid, I'm not that good at converting.

 

[Tercha]

Nice , but to me a bit tooo red, maybe a few bits (the forward machine guns) could be another colour, maybe some kill rings on the barrel? great job though!

 

[Axel91]

Really nice! You should concentrate on taking your time over every single plate and rivet on your vehicles like you did on the grots because it's easy to start getting sloppy at the later stages and rushing some areas. To be honest I think u got sloppy on some parts and they dont look shaded/highlighted properly! (nothing that cant be fixed of course)

 

[cassar]

lovely job well done i think you have a real klinker there, though is that a little runaway blue between the blue pipe and the bonnet?
more pictures the better for me after all "a picture paints a thousand words"

 

[Tagamoga]

It look scrapped, sctratched, old, dirty, scratchy, rusted, bend... well in one word: really orkish. *smile*

It is a really good one!

Greetings, Taggi

 

[cheelfy]

This is totally ork. Good job.

 

[kulandini]

Thanks for all the comments, it's much appreciated!

@Tercha: Great suggestions, I'm gonna have to add some kill rings on the barrel. Thanks!

@Axel91: Could you please give some examples, that way I can fix it before adding it to the gallery. thanks.

@cassar: Nice find, I will fix that up. btw what's a klinker? never heard of that before

@Tagamoga & cheelfy: thanks!

 

[cassar]

Thanks for all the comments, it's much appreciated!

@cassar: Nice find, I will fix that up. btw what's a klinker? never heard of that before

a klinker is a term of phrase it means excellent brilliant very very good. and it is too.

 

[Ghudra]

If you are still open to a bit of finishing work, I'd go back in on the running gear with pigments & add some dust. At present it looks a little too clean on that end of the model and it would be easy to do. On that note, you could also blacken the ends of the exhausts & gun barrels.

The red big shootas are ace & I wouln't change their color. There is something really Orky about Evil Sunz also having red gunz; maybe they kill fasta.

Great work on the krew & you have lots of nice detail painted into this kit.