Hey.. I made a homepage

bakalla

Member
Hello.

I just made a homepage, for my miniatures. It would be GREAT if someone could have a look, and comment at it. Especially, it would be great if someone would want to read the \"history\" parts of the page. It\'s pretty long..

I\'m not a native english speaker (i\'m swedish) so if someone could read and correct my english mistakes, i would appreciate that a lot!

http://heworkshop.cjb.net

Thanks!
 

TobiWan

New member
Nice site! I didn\'t read the whole history - and I\'m not a native speaker either anyway. ;)
Why don\'t you post pics of your minis on your site, too? I always think it\'s not so cool to just have another cmon link. You could add a few lines of thoughts on how much you enjoyed painting a mini and so on to each photo. :)

*edit* I just saw that you added a comment to your cmon postings anyway. :D

Tobi :cool:
 

dauber22

New member
NIce site, Bakalla. I read (and enjoyed!) your \"history\". Don\'t worry about your English! I\'ve seen more language errors on 1 or 2 pages done by native speakers than I did in your entire history and none of those were glaring.

Good luck with the site :D
 

GunjiNoKanrei

New member
Very nice site and very entertaining to read :) The \'history\' is very well written.

I have dropped you a mail with the very few typos I have found but I must warn you - I am not a native english speaker either and I take no guarantees that I am right about everything ;)
 

kittykat23uk

New member
Hi Hakan,

You\'ve done a great job on your site and your spelling and grammar is very good. Its also nice to see what you look like!:D

Regards

Kat
 

ZaPhOd

Super Moderator
Hey, cool! You look like my buddy Steve! Anyhow, I will fire a link up on my page for your site when I have time! Looks good so far, and the history part is especially good!
 

Calavera

New member
Wow... nice looking, also a great history well written. And i did not notice any spelling problems... maybe you fixed them :p Keep up the good work on your minis and update regularly. ;)
 

bakalla

Member
Thanks for the comments and bits of advice, everyone :)

ZaPhOd: Well, I bet your buddy Steve is an incredibly good looking guy ;)

Calavera: I just finished a new mini and updated the page.. I think I did manage to fix most of my spelling too, I hope.. hehe.

Master Painter: I don\'t really collect anything in particular, no. I just paint, don\'t play anything. So I paint anything that feels good at the moment.. which normally means good looking GW minis or Reaper minis. So far I\'ve only been doing fantasy minis though.
 
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