Okies where to start...
(This is going to be harsh young fella so please bear with it)
He looks like he is nursing second degree burns on his face, and has vomited on his shirt.
- smooth out the shirt first with a few layers of very thin mid-toned color
- get more flesh and less red on his face as the hands do not match. Its okay for him to have rosy cheeks and nose, but its a bit mottled ATM and smothing will definitely be needed.
- more layers on the hands, it looks like one coat of base and one of shade and no other layers
- pick out some higlights on the hair on his feet
- more shadow on the coat and trousers and a bit more highlight
- define the eyes a bit by using your face shade color + a bit of a darker color (brown most likely) and place a very thin outline around the eye perimeter. If you aren\'t comfortable with this, a single line over the eye may serve just as well as it appears to be a really tiny mini.
- more highlights on the base and ditch your little signature there: its a bit distracting. Place it on the bottom if you insist on it.
- finish it off with a spritz of dullcote to kill the shine and you\'re done!
