House Stark rune priest

[KAPcom]

Hoping to get some critique on this here model. Mostly built from bits from the chaos warriors box and the space wolves box, painted with Citadel paints.

 

[BloodASmedium]

this is very good the angle you've given is perfect for what I'm about to say. All models need exaggerated highlights and shadows. The scale we work at requires this to show details and depth. We as humans have ordinary shadows in all light sources , minis don't. So IOW you need a little more depth maybe a mid shade on the uppermost ares before the edge highlights I'm sending you a link that should explain zenith all lighting in the best way www.mainlymedieval.com/ozpainters this should help. The edge highlighting is very well done but evenso on the doge highlights to get more depth use a mid color and maybe another increment of a slightly darker grey than the final covering a little less twords the top edge. Then about a mm use the grey you've used on that smallest upper part. Then maybe a light point a small dot if white. Also remeber when painting black start with a decently lighter "dark grey" that's what black is in miniature land dark grey this way when you lay in your shades of pure black you'll have instant depth. All in all it's a wonderful mini and some very neat painting going on. Great work. Any questions I'll be sure to address them if I can.