The icon and the skin color are very cool but the coat doesn\'t work for me. Looks like block painting with an ink slapped on.
Try building up layers (don\'t know...scab red> 50/50 scab red-blood red> blood red + red ink + a thin layer of Vallejo Smoke washed over the coat), I that would give it more dept, IMHO.
On the other hand, it might be just me...