Only thing that would make it stand out: writing/scribbles on the book on his chest, and the scroll on his left shin guard. Fine-tipped black Micron pigma pens work really well for that.
this is great, i really like it, so smooth and they highlights are done well. it would look better if you did the raised bit on the force sword a diffrent colour to make it stand out, keep up the great work
grumble... this is nice, no wait thats and understatement, the blending is perfectly smooth, the scrolls look awesome and... i forgot. Templars can\'t have these guys though. theres always a drawback to armies isn\'t there?