My competition entry. marco columbo

Thecadian

Active member
Hi,
im proberly going to enter this in a comp on wednesday.What do you think about it?Any suggestions are welcomed.

james


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i apologise for the pics
 

Dark Seraphim

New member
Looks great! Nice color scheme, good handling of the different areas, only a better picture would make it a bit easier to judge. The shoes look a tad rushed (your missing the bottom part of the shoe) and the feathers from behind looks unfinished. Other than that, It\'s a great character!

Would give Marco a 7.5
 

generulpoleaxe

New member
my only advice is take more time and use a magnifying glass after each stage to check the neatness.

don\'t get me wrong, it does look good.:)
 

Avelorn

Sven Jonsson
Nice setting! :) I think the colourscheme is working great. However there seems to be parts that are lacking paint or parts where the paint has been chipped off. Be sure to cover all parts of the miniature with paint and that everything is neat and tidy. The highlights look really good in that aspect, but I don\'t think the shading is taken care off to the same extent. Try to turn the miniature up-side-down under your painting light to check for places not covered in paint. Good luck at the competition!! :)
 

Thecadian

Active member
Thanks people the only problem now is that hes just fallen off his base.I could try pinnong but hes only on tip toes so it will be hard:(

james
 

Fireymonkeyboy

New member
Hi,

Good base, good colours, but the painting could be a fair bit crisper. You\'ve had good advice on this so far - as well as a magnifying glass, digicam photos can provide good magnification for finding mistakes and untidy bits.

FMB
 
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