my first, be gentle: Chan Li

Entiago

New member
So a long troller walks into the forums...I have been a member of this great site for years now, a few posts under my belt. But as of yet to make a submission for judging.

This is not my first painting, but my first submission onto the site. comments and criticisms would be appriciated. I just need to work on my photography also..

also which would be the better to post up for judging of the 2 i have here?
 

freakinacage

Well-known member
not the best pics, a bit dark and the white balance seems off but it looks like you have done a good job. eyes look a little stare-y and he looks a little glossy but otherwise seems good. esp the white, which is a difficult colour to paint
 

Entiago

New member
thanks! yeah the glossy is from a coat of Brush-on Sealer from Reaper MasterSeries. I am looking into finding a dull coat protective sealer.
 

waghorn41

Member
Well I like this, there is some areas of shading on the white which are a little rough but otherwise the white looks good. From the pictures it does seem 'glossy' but not as bad as many I've seen, in fact what you've achieved is a sweaty look to the skin which is very appropriate. Look forward to seeing more of your work.
 

supervike

Super Moderator
I think pic one shows your mini off better.

Instead of just repeating what the others say, my criticism would be that he doesn't feel like he is a part of the base. If feels like he is just stuck on. I think filing off those parts on his feet would make him feel more connected.

Anyhow, welcome, and I hope we see more from you!!
 
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