Hello there BB!
Shouldn't be so hard on yourself, this last one maybe its not a ten, but neither it's a 2 or 3. For me this can rate around a 5 or maybe a little more, much more if you think you have just painted a few minis!
Every colour it's in its own place, I can see work on highlights and some shadows too, and that's much more than what I did on my first miniatures!
(My first were much much much MUCH worse!) hahahaha
In fact being just your third miniature, I think you almost reached a nice thickness of the paint, and lots of people struggle a lot with that issue! (I did and still do sometimes) All I can say now is, keep on painting, and don't hesitate to ask what you need, people around here is very kind!
PS: I am still painting the Arcadia Quest ones! that's the reason I did not went into Masmorra, also because I am waiting for the inferno kickstarter to arrive home...