My First Rackham mini

[minimart]

I have just finished my first Kelt. I am pretty happy with it. I am looking for help for the next one. Thanks in advance for your help.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/69058

Mike

 

[frenchkid]

well nice skin tone expet maybe on the face were it could be shaded a bit ore to give the face more expressiveness. And I would post the front shot as the bigger one since that is were we see al the details. Gets a solid 7 from me.

 

[tidoco2222]

That looks real nice and for your first Rackhams mini that\'s quite an achievement especially as the kelts aren\'t the easiest ones to start with.
I have to say a lot better than my first one turned out.
Keep it up.

 

[minimart]

@frenchkid & tidoco
Thanks guys, I am going to keep the first one as it is and move on to the next one. Improve as i go I hope

Thanks

 

[frayedbrush]

Reply posted

Hrm, posted a reply to the comments, wondering if I should just cut and paste it... eh, will just summarize. Fleshtones look good, it fits the lighter-skin tone of a redhead. The eyebrows could use some better definition or highlighting, and not sure if he is supposed to have a mustache or not?

The blacklining on the ropes overlaying the kilt looks good, and you should consider adding blacklining to some other areas such as where the kilt meets the flesh of his legs.

 

[minimart]

Thanks for the input and suggestions. Lots to work on I appreciate the help and will use the same pattern with the suggestions on the next one.

Thanks again,

Mike