my Hallebardiers of Dirz

Zajon V

New member
hi all!

my third and fourth jobs....

i hope you like it!;)



http://www.coolminiornot.com/114077
http://www.coolminiornot.com/114686

p.s= i paint mini from 1 month
 

Ritual

New member
Welcome to the forums! :)

This is pretty good, especially considering the time you\'ve been painting. I like the colour scheme with the bright orange clothing and the otherwise bleak colours. What this predominantely lacks, though, is depth in shadows. You need more shading! This is particularly important on your NMM areas, where the contrast between dark shadow and extremely bright reflections is what gives the illusion of a metallic surface.

Keep at it, and you\'ll get the hang of it in no time, considering how fast you\'ve managed to achieve results like these! :)
 

Zajon V

New member
Originally posted by Ritual
Welcome to the forums! :)

This is pretty good, especially considering the time you\'ve been painting. I like the colour scheme with the bright orange clothing and the otherwise bleak colours. What this predominantely lacks, though, is depth in shadows. You need more shading! This is particularly important on your NMM areas, where the contrast between dark shadow and extremely bright reflections is what gives the illusion of a metallic surface.

Keep at it, and you\'ll get the hang of it in no time, considering how fast you\'ve managed to achieve results like these! :)

thanks for your comments

I will improve to the next miniatura
 

Ogrebane

Active member
This is great work. You have some talent. I expect great things from you. Voted love the minis.

The only thng is the bases need to be cleaned up.
 

freakinacage

Well-known member
very nice. the blending is very smooth. as ritual says, try to darken the shading. i look foreward to seeing how you progress
 

Jambot13

New member
As has been said these need some extra shading, but great work anyway. I actually think that your style would suit some quite stark blacklining on these two. It would bring them out a treat and really strengthen the colours.
 
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