My new daemon of Slaanesh
- Thread starter Hellric
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Nice work. Been and voted. I\'m not sure what\'s not quite right about the pic, so hopefully someone with more experience will come in here, but it seems slightly out of focus or fuzzy, so I\'m losing a lot of the detail.
From what I can make out though, there\'s some good stuff going on. The wings and flesh tones came out well, though the \"claws\" seem to be not quite as highlighted in the pic. The blade of the polearm also doesn\'t seem as smooth, with the red on it. Not sure if you were going for a \"bloody\" look, but it doesn\'t seem to communicate that well in the pic.
Aesthetically, I like what you\'ve done with it. I might suggest slightly cooler color mixed in with the flesh tone to bing the colors together a little better, but that\'s purely an artistic choice.
From what I can make out though, there\'s some good stuff going on. The wings and flesh tones came out well, though the \"claws\" seem to be not quite as highlighted in the pic. The blade of the polearm also doesn\'t seem as smooth, with the red on it. Not sure if you were going for a \"bloody\" look, but it doesn\'t seem to communicate that well in the pic.
Aesthetically, I like what you\'ve done with it. I might suggest slightly cooler color mixed in with the flesh tone to bing the colors together a little better, but that\'s purely an artistic choice.
wrestlerguy21
New member
I took a look a this guy. There are some good area\'s. The photo quality is out of focus a bit though. I like the wings and the horns are nicely blended. That being said some area\'s (the claws) are very flat and under-highlighted. The end of his sword looks a bit rough as well.
I like you use of color and the painting looks smooth. I think if you just changed those few items it would bring a higher score. Hope that helped.
I like you use of color and the painting looks smooth. I think if you just changed those few items it would bring a higher score. Hope that helped.
mattsterbenz
New member
good job. try highlighting the skulls up to bleached bone, and the skin could be a little bit lighter on the raised areas to create more definition around the horns, face, etc...
The photo is too blurred to offer any comments on the painting, but you look to have done a great job with the conversion. The transitions between the different parts look nice and smooth and they all work together very nicely. If you got a better photo done I\'m pretty sure the mark would rocket up.
Jabberwocky
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Welcome to the forums, Hellric!
Been and voted. I think the others have made some good points. I might add some of the areas appear a bit rough although that can be related to the photo. Thinning your paint will help with that.
Hope that helps,
Jabber
Been and voted. I think the others have made some good points. I might add some of the areas appear a bit rough although that can be related to the photo. Thinning your paint will help with that.
Hope that helps,
Jabber
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