newbie wanting feedback

[Ilharess]

Hi everyone, Im new here and for some reason am unable to validate my account - so I can\'t shout.

I would really like some feedback on my minis, so if maybe a few of you could go look and let me know what you think that would be fantastic.

Thankyou
Ilharess

 

[james sequeira]

links ?

 

[generulpoleaxe]

http://coolminiornot.com/123038

@llharess, your off to a good start.
try to work your highlights up a little lighter.

read the articles section mate and use the wip thread for good constructive critisism.

welcom on board.

 

[No Such Agency]

The base is great! The water lacks translucence but still looks water-y. To get translucent water use a clear medium (acrylic gel, glue etc) for the texture, and underpaint it for colour. The figure seems to have been painted with very thick paints, that really shows especially when highlighting etc. Also you didn\'t remove the mold line from his face very well, I know it\'s a real pain to do but it is still glaringly obvious.

 

[supervike]

I really like the base, and the painting on the horse. I agree, some paints seem a little too thick, but overall this is a good job.

My biggest quibble would be the eye looks too big, making the whole thing look cartoony. I gave it a 7.

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