Quite nice, I really like it eventhough it\'s not my kind of miniatures... Well, I was going to mention the shoulders, but since you said the are a bit \'dodgy\'.... I\'l leav that aside.
Apart from this, from a purely conceptual point of view, I don\'t like the weapon hanging in his back. The handle looks much to small. And the shape.... It\'s, well, bizarre. It reminds me of a frying pan, I gues it\'s not what you meant to do...

All the rest is superb! (I really like the head

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