Ork Tank Busta

10 ball

New member
Good green skin! Think the gold eagle on the shoulder needs more contrast, maybe a wash of dark brown? Love the NMM
 

lono

New member
Gotta paint me some Orks some time soon, it's been much too long! This one is a bit of a mixed job for me. Good things - I think the NMM looks funky, and actually manages to suit the Orks even though you haven't grubbied it up (I think it's because you've nailed the dark, blueish hues of steel in there) and I like the extra detail on the base too. I'm not keen on the skin however, it looks a bit underworked and somewhat blotchy. I think more contrast is needed, and it could perhaps benefit from being toned down overall. As has already been mentioned, the aquilla is probably the biggest weak point. It, and the other yellow bits, look a bit like an afterthought that were rather rushed.

All in all, it's good, but with a little extra work I think it could be improved. :)

Cheers,
James
 

supervike

Super Moderator
Your style seems to lend well to these orcs. I agree there are some technical issues, but honestly, it's the overall impression that leaves me so impressed.

Your stuff always brightens my day.
 

Shawn R. L.

New member
Not to be a whiner but I still have a problem getting a good shot. Seems that things get grainy/blotchy. I've tried a lot of different camera settings and light setups.....not sure what to do about that aspect.

Thanks for all the critique's. Funny how some things seem so obvious much later but when I'm actually painting I hit a point at which I draw a blank. Thanks again.
 
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