Request for Comments 60752

[Valander]

The title pretty much says it all. I\'d love to hear comments on my newest Nightwretch. http://www.coolminiornot.com/60752

In particular, I\'d like feedback on my color choices. The flourescent green I used in the engine vents really doesn\'t photo well--that part most definitely looks a lot better in person.

Thanks in advance!

 

[finn17]

I think that works really well...

Very nice indeed. There does seem to be a lack of a focal point however, which is always a difficulty when using a limited pallette. ... I don\'t have an answer....but I feel that something should be made the central point of interest, preferably to draw attention to the head...

 

[Valander]

Thanks! I think part of that may be the photo (still working with a measly 640x480 pixel camera!), but I agree that there\'s a lack of a focal point. Part of that is because I can\'t decide what it is! I think, though, that I may try darkening the tip of the beak somewhat, making it look more like a raptor than a doom turkey.

 

[Trevor]

Looks good to me, focal point on the beak would work well.

maybe a dark reddish brown? With the very tip bright red, provides lots of contrast without sacrificing the subdued pallette.

 

[Gypsy]

Oh, an evil monster in pastel colours!

I like it although it doesn\'t look particularly evil. And yeah, paint the beak as Trevor said, that\'ll ought to look good.
Maybe some more blackling would define the mini better as well.