Runelord

[pate]

My first submission! It's a Runelord for my Dwarf Throng. There be WIP's in the WIP section.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/240162

Feel free to vote. I'm also very interested in why you voted the way you did, or even if you didn't vote I'm interested in your thougts. Help me improve

 

[cleen X]

I like it! There are some places where the blending could have been better. The highlighting is placed very well though. Nice looking color scheme to Voted 7.

 

[Donga]

You can blend, there's not a great deal wrong. The areas that could do with a bit of work are the transition areas, such as face-beard and some of the other areas. The face looks too pale and lacks a bit of definition (and eyes!), the face should be the focus of your work. It's the first thing people look at and should be given the most attention. Otherwise a good solid paintjob! 6.5 from me (better than a 6, not as good as a 7, but I am hard to please).

 

[pate]

I like it! There are some places where the blending could have been better. The highlighting is placed very well though. Nice looking color scheme to Voted 7.

Aha, you're the first one that's actually liked the colors! I was afraid he'd turn out all grey and brown so I took pretty much any chance I had to add some color, and not using the same twice

You can blend, there's not a great deal wrong. The areas that could do with a bit of work are the transition areas, such as face-beard and some of the other areas. The face looks too pale and lacks a bit of definition (and eyes!), the face should be the focus of your work. It's the first thing people look at and should be given the most attention. Otherwise a good solid paintjob! 6.5 from me (better than a 6, not as good as a 7, but I am hard to please).

Noted The face was probably one of the areas that got the least of my attention, I was so engulfed by the NMM. You're absoulutely right and I wont neglect it again. About the eyes, there's some really unfortunate shading from the lamp, which completely covers the eyes and eyesockets. They are painted, and not in black as the picture tells you. There's not really any excuse for not taking new pictures but I was too tired and couldn't be arsed to take new ones I just wanted to get the pictures out there, hehe.

 

[exilesjjb]

would second the face needing more, and not sure about the red horns but over all I like the figure. Looking forward to more stunties for you.