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[gilles le breton]

I did this a while ago after some lessons, i'm happy with it, what do you think?

http://coolminiornot.com/256729

feedback most welcome

 

[cheelfy]

It looks nice but I think you could highlight a bit more some area like the hair and shade areas of the armor that aren't in a "light zone" (do you understand what I mean there?), also maybe a bit more red shading on the flames.

 

[BPI]

Hi Gilles, presentation first!

Curl a sheet of blank paper under/behind the mini & photo it/crop it with the whole mini in frame Include the whole of the base & the rest of that flame.

If you take 4 shots of the mini, at roughly eye level, showing front/back/l/r & then a single shot closer to the one you've got, showing the pose/paint at it's optimum. Montage them together for a single Gallery entry. You may well see a score difference

The paint all looks neat & I like the colour choices. You're really into spending more time territory

Most reward for least work would be to work on the head. Work the hair more. Glints on the optical thing. Tint her lips. Has her mascara run? Sell that warpaint design to me! It's probably the photo but there's a yellow edge to her skin that would look healthier with a pinker tint?

I like flames that go to black to represent the smoke. But then I tend to be painting smutty torches rather than Sci-Fi holographic braziers A touch more red as Cheelfy mentioned, keeping the whitest points lower on each flame would be good.

Is the purple on that book ribbon picked up anywhere else on the mini?

Anyway, more, better & bigger pics is what I really want. Let me see more please

Cheers, B.

 

[supervike]

I think you've got a good solid mini there, and with the tips from those two before me, it would really pop.