Skarre

[MathewBaich]

Hey, I need some comments on my next contest entry taking place in February. and vote if you want also.

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[OrkyDave]

This is nice but there are some areas that could do with work on if you have time before the comp.

I absolutley love the concept of the base, but I feel the wood could look a bit more mankier if it is part of a shipwreck.

The metallics are great, love these.

The whole crotch area looks rushed and a but messy, the chainmail is blobby and the shadows and skintones on the thighs look out of place.

What is going on with the top of her head? It is very hard to tell if thats hair or horns, at the minute it looks like a pair of wolftails which does appear to be quite odd.

Sorry if this sounds harsh, the rest looks great, and I feel these are areas that need work doing to them. If you can get these up to the same standard as the rest of her, I feel you will have a very strong entry for your competition.

Hope this helps, as intended

 

[Ogrebane]

More layers is what this mini needs. Your transitions on the armour for instance are too abrupt. I like the mini tho and the base is awesome. The metals are goo as well but the gold/brass could use a little more work maybe more highlighting.

great stuff tho.

 

[MathewBaich]

thanks guys for showing me the error of my ways. I tried to fix as much as I could, but I couldn\'t save the chainmail It looks much better, thanks guys.