Skaven Hellpit Abomination

[Engineer Jeff]

I just posted up some pics of this beast and wanted to get some feedback/critiques. This was the first fig I have done with a good portion of it being done by airbrush. I also did alot of weathering on the engine in the back with earth pigments. I didnt like the wheel underneath so i filled that in with plumber's putty.
I am just now getting the hang of making a collage, so bear with me. More pics can be found at my blogsite in my sig.

http://www.coolminiornot.com/299458


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[BPI]

Hi Jeff, presentation still needs a polish methinks. Simple montage that means you can ditch all the black fill, instructions in my post here...


http://www.coolminiornot.com/forums/showthread.php?48686-Creating-an-image-to-submit


My personal preference is for the top shot to show the entire mini (including base) which none of your shots do, each has bits of the model chopped out. Pics with the blue/grey background are a lot better than the top one with a black background. If it's the same cloth then there's some colour balancing that needs to be attended to!


Bottom pic in particular is lovely and sharp, nice smooth paint on display there :good:


Cheers, B.

 

[freakinacage]

Aye, too much black with a tiny model in the middle

 

[supervike]

I'm not overly fond of the mini, but I like the real 'fleshy' skin colors.

I think the eye needs a bit more highlight, to make it feel more alive.