It looks excellent to me... but I am sure that metallic highlights can only be truly seen in real life... or at a certain angle when taking a pic... in your picture I am not sure if I am seeing the shine or a nicely textured skin or both. ^^
I like the look of the vampire. Kind of reminds me of Anne Rice's concept of how the ancient vampires in her books we said to look like living marble statues, in your representation that same hardness applies but with more of a metallic feel.
Godlike painting.deity detailer,I dub thee "The brush assasin" obviously of minis cause your pictures show a very happy,compassionate sweed who simply loves painting minis"!!!
needed a break from my current exhausting project so started painting the first of 3 ogres a little (only like an hour so far). going for a littlebit more cartoony, catachan jungle theme on these. the aim is to finish them for gd in november but in current speed... hmmm...