my first post and mini here, so hi.
Open to all comments and criticism on how i can improve
www.coolminiornot.com/74701
Thanks,
Josh
Open to all comments and criticism on how i can improve
www.coolminiornot.com/74701
Thanks,
Josh
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Slaanesh Chaos Warrior
- Thread starter Caboose
- Start date
Frustrated Father
New member
Welcome to the site and the forums.
Gave you a five for table top as I think the use of some washes and highlights on the armor would help out the figure quite a bit.
Me, I\'m still working on it all as well, but I find that looking at some of the articles on this site as well as forum posts and the great figures shown here really help when you sit down to work on a figure.
Hope this helps and is what you were looking for. Overall, a nice clean job.
Gave you a five for table top as I think the use of some washes and highlights on the armor would help out the figure quite a bit.
Me, I\'m still working on it all as well, but I find that looking at some of the articles on this site as well as forum posts and the great figures shown here really help when you sit down to work on a figure.
Hope this helps and is what you were looking for. Overall, a nice clean job.
LouisCypher
New member
welcome aboard!
it\'s a nice start, but there are some things you have to do to increase your skill:
1. highlights: the armour really needs some to sharpen its edges
2. darklining: you should darken the areas between, for example, the staff and the hand and the leather stripes of the axe handle
3. mouldlines: there\'s a huge one running through the handle and the left hand of the warrior, get rid of it.
4. shading: try to blend from a darker brown to bone colour on the fangs and nails
that will make your score rise!
anyway, it\'s a 6 for me
i hope i\'d been helpful!
Luca
it\'s a nice start, but there are some things you have to do to increase your skill:
1. highlights: the armour really needs some to sharpen its edges
2. darklining: you should darken the areas between, for example, the staff and the hand and the leather stripes of the axe handle
3. mouldlines: there\'s a huge one running through the handle and the left hand of the warrior, get rid of it.
4. shading: try to blend from a darker brown to bone colour on the fangs and nails
that will make your score rise!
anyway, it\'s a 6 for me
i hope i\'d been helpful!
Luca
