Squat sniper

[MBE trance]

This is my first posting, just wanted to see what people think and how to improve.

The sniper rifle is quite black still as I was trying for a matt black rifle.

Cheers.

 

[Shawn R. L.]

Looks good so far. The black shading on the do-rag could be a bit lighter and the toe nails could use a bit of white.

 

[Undave]

Hate to be anal but it\'s a Ratling not a Squat lol I\'m liking the camo tho

 

[Manus]

Good camo but you need more shading. See what you mean about the riffle but it needs more colors or some extreme highlight otherwise it\'ll just look unpainted.

 

[Highbulp Billy]

The sniper (yes, he is a Ratling) looks pretty good. Bit more depth on the skin with a wash or two and tidy up his foot.

The rifle - can see whta you\'re trying to achieve with the Matte black scheme but does need something to bring it up a bit - extreme edge highlighting should work here.

However, my main suggestion would be to improve the base - the black/grey stones and grass don\'t look right together. I would overbrush the stones with shades of brown and drybrush the grass too. This would compliment the camo scheme better too.

For a first posting, you show a lot of promise (nice colour choices, neat brushwork and excellent work on the camo) and we expect great things from you now... welcome:beer:

 

[freakinacage]

Originally posted by Highbulp Billy
The sniper (yes, he is a Ratling) looks pretty good. Bit more depth on the skin with a wash or two and tidy up his foot.

The rifle - can see whta you\'re trying to achieve with the Matte black scheme but does need something to bring it up a bit - extreme edge highlighting should work here.

i agree. but i don\'t mind the base actually but i see what billy means. love the face - full of character

 

[Ogrebane]

Camo paint on the face and more highlighting.