ExpYouthSLAYER69
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Latest work, i put it on here to get some feedback and advice, thank you
Edgar
http://www.coolminiornot.com/164216
Edgar
http://www.coolminiornot.com/164216
Taelor-Lady Hammerstrike
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Avelorn
Sven Jonsson
Not bad! 
Try to define parts of the mini more. Sepparating each part from each other. You can do that by using a lining step.. but it depends how you work with your minis. I use the deepest shading as a lining step as well and use more what you would call \"controlled washes\" Sometimes I do darkline (\"blackline\" but I never use black) parts if it\'s necessary. Meaning using a fine brush and separate parts from each other with a fine line.
The base is nice and subtle but I like the backside more where there is actually something going on (the grass) Try adding some tufts to the front as well. To make grey stone more lively and interesting you can try glazing it with browns and greens to do some shifts in colour. You often see that on natural rock as well as it is coloured by lichens and moss.
Well done!
Try to define parts of the mini more. Sepparating each part from each other. You can do that by using a lining step.. but it depends how you work with your minis. I use the deepest shading as a lining step as well and use more what you would call \"controlled washes\" Sometimes I do darkline (\"blackline\" but I never use black) parts if it\'s necessary. Meaning using a fine brush and separate parts from each other with a fine line.
The base is nice and subtle but I like the backside more where there is actually something going on (the grass) Try adding some tufts to the front as well. To make grey stone more lively and interesting you can try glazing it with browns and greens to do some shifts in colour. You often see that on natural rock as well as it is coloured by lichens and moss.
Well done!
NerdyOgre254
New member
very good. smooth highlighting.
vincegamer
Active member
Not bad. Good skin, if slightly heavily painted.
I\'d have reduced the lean. She looks kind of like she\'s falling down drunk.
The right arm/hammer should have more colors in there. The flexible bits of the armor (inside the elbow joint e.g.) should be very different, maybe even cloth.
The handle of the hammer would look better much lighter than the head - sort of like distinguishing an aluminum shaft from an iron head.
Love the pants.
Interesting choice having her gloved.
I did one of these and it\'s a fun mini to paint.
I\'d have reduced the lean. She looks kind of like she\'s falling down drunk.
The right arm/hammer should have more colors in there. The flexible bits of the armor (inside the elbow joint e.g.) should be very different, maybe even cloth.
The handle of the hammer would look better much lighter than the head - sort of like distinguishing an aluminum shaft from an iron head.
Love the pants.
Interesting choice having her gloved.
I did one of these and it\'s a fun mini to paint.
