To answer the comments you made in reply to comments posted by folks I guess I\'ll go number by number. Please be aware that none of this is a \"slam\" or otherwise meant to be discouraging. Comments were asked for so I wrote what I thought as well as what I hoped was taken as helpful criticism as well as what didn\'t appeal to me and why. I am not always the most delicate of people when I state my opinions, but I\'m also honest in what I think.
1). I assumed that you had worked closely with Vallejo since there was so much there from them. I had no objection to that and in fact think that it was good. However, just seeing the Vallejo swatches without any like references from other manufactures was curious and just stuck out to me. Solo company swatches, when the book wasn\'t built around them, didn\'t seem to add that much to the book. The conversion chart is useful, but I don\'t see what a company color listing really added other than filler.
2). Fine by me and I do know that everyone has their own learning style.

To me a learning guide should be well in depth as possible, but that is my style. Regardless of type, I did think that the articles covered too much of a different learning field. The differences in how the articles are set out (some have great descriptions for the pictures, and some have really poor or very little text but lots of pictures that don\'t connect well to the text), makes it, at least for me annoying to read, glance over or to try to gain anything from them. Just as a suggestion, maybe for the next one you could find the most popular \"style\" of article and gear submissions to that, then place others in another form of presentation style in either a different book. It might also make the book more defined. In a few places it was hard to tell whether the book, or the section, was meant to be more of a guide or gallery.
3). I wasn\'t aware if you did this or not, but I\'m glad to hear that you did. I do hope that the next one has more variety and people willing to meet the photo requirements. For a first book it\'s a very good showing and I\'m aware you work with what you have, but was an area I felt that could and does need improvement next time around.
4). The turnout was excellent for a small company without a name. Same additional comments as above apply.
I was aware that Darkson was a small company, however I did not take into account that nor that this was a labor of love for you or how much time had to be squeezed out to make it happen. In the long range anyone reading the book will either not know that or not really factor that into whether or not to buy the book. It\'s the same as with anything else, you could put years, blood, sweat and tears into it but in end it doesn\'t mean that people will see that or like it or not point out flaws or improvements that they see. Or that you should take critics of the final work personally because of the effort and time you put in. Just as a random example, you can (and I for one have) spend months to years working on scientific articles/projects and see it get rejected because it\'s not agreed with, have every little flaw pointed out in the worst possible major, fail in your goals because you didn\'t pay enough attention to your target audience when writing it, etc, etc, etc. The main point is that I understand that it was a labor of love for you and took alot of time to do, but those are truthfully not things that should get factored into comments on the final product or that should be taken personally. Reviews and critics are usually done on the final product without care of what went into it.
The miniature hobby has one of the largest amounts of works, of all kinds, shapes and forms, coming from people who have a true love and desire to help others in the hobby that I\'ve ever seen. I hope you do make Volume 2 better based on all reviews both good and bad. The series has some great potential to it.
Maya~