TheSlaughterman

[Brandlin]

Just finished up this that i posted before on the WIP page.

Please vote and comment

your comments for improvement and your votes would be very welcome. Especially any advise on the blending and shading - still not as smooth (both in colour transition and texture) as i would like.

Regards

Brandlin
(Alan)

 

[EricJ]

While the photo is a little small, it looks to be good work here, the green looks quite well blended. Combined with your browns and skintones it does make quite a nice piece.

I\'m not sure if I like the yellow inside the coat.

Although mostly I would like better photos

-Eric

 

[Brandlin]

Originally posted by EricJ
While the photo is a little small, it looks to be good work here, the green looks quite well blended. Combined with your browns and skintones it does make quite a nice piece.

I\'m not sure if I like the yellow inside the coat.

Although mostly I would like better photos

-Eric

Wow praise from ericj.... what a great early birthsday present for tomorrow!!

I was trying to make the inside of the coat look like yellow/gold silk/satin ... the coat overall like a wax jacket or a dryzabone...

The blending isn\'t as good on the yellow as on the green of the coat so i\'ll probably redo it... any suggestions? I thought perhaps a darker shade of the coat itself, almost a dark grey/green?

As to pictures... am still experimenting with my digi camera, so apologies if they are not great, i was actually reasonably happy with these ones

 

[Naoned]

Hi,

One of he things you should work, it\'s his face. He\'s got an inexpressive face (may be it\'s because of the sculpture too?).
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Naoned

 

[Mosch]

Naoned, your Avatar rocks my socks off.

Brandlin, very nice mini, for some reason I immideatly thought of Jack the ripper I have to agree about the face though, it looks a little... bland. I am not sure about the mouth, it looks as if he doesn\'t actually have one, just a little grove in his face... looks more like a beak to me at the moment. Maybe pronounce the mouth more and add a little darklining where his leg meets the coat. Still it\'s a very good mini. I voted 8.

 

[Brokenblade]

Voted and commented

 

[Naoned]

Message original : Mosch
Naoned, your Avatar rocks my socks off.

In french we say \"ça me troue le c...\"

Naoned

 

[EricJ]

I sort of like the almost featureless face, I think it sort of fits the rest of the piece But that said, probably a little more definition wouldn\'t hurt.