Spending all of your time painting topless ladies and doing latenight Call Of Duty gaming, it\'s no wonder Laura\'s seeing me behind your bac... er... did I say that out loud or just think it? Shit! lol
Aaaaanyway!
Despite me liking the previous version of Artemis\' skin I like what you have added in this one. A few spots could perhaps be slightly smoother - this update doesn\'t quite look as well blended in a few places - but overall an improvement. The face, hair and all that business look much better too.
Akanke looks like you have spent much less time on her to me. I know from seeing other versions of her that she\'s never easy to photograph, so I\'m not sure if it\'s because of that, but it looks like the skin is pretty basic. A a lot of the lighting effect seems to be coming from natural sources rather than shading and highlights. Still looks decent enough, but I can\'t exactly tell. The eyes and face do look good for sure, although a bigger photo would be nice to take a proper look.
The orange highlights on the red trousers are a little stark. I think that they could do with more transitions.
Also, the metals don\'t do a whole lot for me if I\'m being honest. I think a big problem is the lack of definition between the gold and surrounding areas in particular. The belt as an example, just seems to merge into the red of the pants because there is no real lining to it, and the colours of the two element are tonaly similar.